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Interested in your thoughts, as an old man, about an old man walking in a crowd. I see the same thing from a bicycle saddle, and it has occurred to me that those for whom the world has 'denied the privilege' of an automobile, and perhaps with even a hint of grace, can see The World in a more comprehensive light. Like Wendell Berry, still plowing his 40 acres with mules.. But maybe that's more likely for the person with sufficient privilege that they can 'choose' to not partake of the "luxury' of transport by automobile.

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[For Susan Westbrook]

I walk on doctor's orders every other day

I walk the Crabtree Valley Mall

Lungs stiff

Legs rusted cables.

Here under the skylight

I practice to be

A king in the field

Every other day.

A king does not trudge he does not shuffle

Sunk in his own thoughts

Neither does he pursue a goal

Jaw set

A to B and out.

A king glides

Foot sure of the ground

Lift off touch down

Lightly on the buoyant surface

Poised.

He looks each one he passes in the face

An invitation.

From behind a line of shoppers

Blocking the lane

Slow like a school of oblivious fish

He tempers his pace

Does not crowd

Waits for a natural opening

Slips by without disturbance.

Most do not notice

The easy look in the face

Others look away

No matter

His invitation stands.

Yet a few others meet his glance

A slight nod of recognition

They pass queens and kings of the field.

Many say these consumers are zombies

Not in control under a spell

In each face

He sees that is not so

The lame the sprightly

The burdened the veiled

Traveling the gaps in colors

All are vital

Walking the Crabtree Valley Mall

Among the bright sprays of children

The more likely to return his look.

Walk ending

Unstiffened shed of rust

Liquid

Ungrasped.

The skylight asks

Isn't this king you practice

A made up character?

No doctor's orders

Yes always make it up.

The skylight blesses and invites

Take it out from this cathedral

The Crabtree Valley Mall

You there

Take it away and walk it.

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"Most do not notice

The easy look in the face

Others look away"

The tiny tragedies of the 'not noticings'. Thanks for this. I'm trying, gently, to more frequently engage those trapped in themselves.

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“ He looks each one he passes in the face… An Invitation,” oh how this moved me! Only at a walking pace can we truly take in another and invite a conversation or simply an acknowledgment or recognition without words. Perhaps walking will heal us…

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Flood-tide below me! I see you face to face!

Clouds of the west—sun there half an hour high—I see you also face to face.

Crossing Brooklyn Ferry, Walt Whitman

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